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Leafpool by EtheTheKitteh

As always, your eyes are well-placed and emotional and your tail is drawn beautifully. Well done. I love the detail you included with t...

Lionblaze by EtheTheKitteh

The outline color and Lionblaze's fur compliment each other nicely. Additionally, the stripes seems quite natural. The details in his e...

Jayfather by EtheTheKitteh

I definitely prefer this work in comparison to your Hollyeyes' piece. You included shading, highlighted the fur, and chose a suitable b...

Hollyleaf by EtheTheKitteh

Hollyeyes' fur is entirely one color - black. And to be frank, it's quite plain without any form of shading or highlighting. Though, I ...

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1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel. 
2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon. 
3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie. 
4. [x] They are physically strong.
5. [ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour. 
6. [ ] Their eyes are an unusual color. 
7. [ ] This eye color happens. to be red. 
8. [ ] Their eyes change color. 
9. [ ] They have wings. 
10. [ ]They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift. 
11. [ ] They are immortal.
12. [x] [If female.] They have large boobs.
13. [ ] [If male.] They are very muscular. 
14. [x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. 
15. [ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc. 
16. [ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc. 
17. [ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.
18. [ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet. 
19. [ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers. 
20. [ ] They are a healer. 
21. [ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
22. [ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background. 
23. [ ] They have lost one/both of their parents. 
24. [ ] They ran away from home. 
25. [ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. 
26. [ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death. 
27. [ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature. 
28. [ ] They never knew their parents.
29. [ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.
30. [x] They are very attractive to the same gender. 
31. [x] They have lots of friends/no friends. 
32. [ ] They are emo/cutesy. 
33. [ ] They look much younger/older than they really are. 
34. [ ] They are currently in a relationship.
35. [ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit. 
36. [ ] They have a mental disorder.
37. [ ] They have an emotional disorder.
38. [ ] They struggle to stay sane.
39. [ ] They are a psycho. 
40. [ ] They have multiple personalities.
41. [x] They are very intelligent. 
42. [ ] They have hallucinations. 
43. [ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. 
44. [ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet. 
45. [ ] They have a guardian spirit. 
46. [ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
47. [ ] Their soul is not the same as them. 
48. [ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.
49. [ ] Some part of their body glows. 
50. [ ] They have a rare/unusual name.
51. [ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc. 
52. [ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age. 
53. [ ] They are connected with a certain element. 
54. [ ] They are connected with a certain animal. 
55. [ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'. 
56. [ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga. 
57. [ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated/against/misunderstood. 
58. [ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared.
59. [ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives.
60. [ ] They are hiding from someone/something. 
61. [ ] They have a rare blood type.
62. [ ] They cry blood.
63. [ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc. make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown. 
64. [ ] They are from a different country to where they live 
65. [ ] They are very mysterious/dark. 
66. [x] They are very lively/happy.
67. [ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly. 
68. [ ] They are very patient. 
69. [ ] They are from a long line of assassins. 
70. [ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear. 
71. [ ] They have amnesia. 
72. [ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them. 
73. [ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
74. [ ] They are 'the chosen one'.
75. [ ] They have insomnia. 
Overall Points : 7

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Point Reduction ::
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

1. [ ] They smoke. 
2. [ ] They are an alcoholic. 
3. [ ] They are overweight. 
4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs. 
5. [ ] They have a short temper. 
6. [ ] They enjoy bullying others.
7. [ ] They do not care much about others. 
8. [ ] They are relatively emotionless. 
9. [ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
Total: 0


RESULT: 7


0-05 :: Anti-Sue.
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit. 

06-15 :: Balanced Character.
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 :: Borderline Mary-Sue. 
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26 :: Mary-Sue. 
Please revise your character... NOW.


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Pretty balanced. ^^

The character I used was a spicy blond bombshell with giant breasts. Goes to show, this isn't terribly accurate, but it was entertaining. ovo;
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nefteenclaw
J.K.
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United States
I'm Nefteen, welcome to my deviantArt page/profile~! :iconimhappyboomplz:


I love Three Days Grace, Warrior Cats,manga, sword fighting and Vocaloid. Putting out a whole lot of worthless info is my specialty~, but anyways, feel free to look around in my gallery.

My //real-life// BFs:
:iconwildwolves195: (wildwolves195),
:iconbirchstream: (Birchstream),
:icong0dseed: (G0dSEeD)
:iconsilverwind6868: (Silverwind)

~

My //online// BFs:
:iconcorrupt-purification: (Shallowcreek)

Art style: Manga/Anime style, I suppose. ouo
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jyoujo Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Student Photographer
:wave: Hi !:shamrock:
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have a nice day ! ! ! 
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nefteenclaw Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem! You, too!
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UsagiNoAka Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for the fav !! :D
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thanks for the fave! :D
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No problem! Keep up the good work. c;
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Thank you for yoy fav in my Krory picture
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No problem, hon. ^^
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nefteenclaw Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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thanks for faving my Lenalee pic!
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